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#WritersCoffeeClub 20 Jul 'In terms of writing what are you most thankful for'

62 years on this planet

I was quite mediocre at this stuff when I was at school

shunned fiction for much of my life

I now firmly believe that my adventurous, misspent, first 61 years has given me all the experiences and material a novelist (like me) could ever hope for

it’s enriched me as a person, and enriches my eclectic dialogue

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… the story and I started writing it on 26 Jan 2025. It was completed on 9 Feb 2025 (overlapping with work on other chapters).

I have barely tinkered with it since then, except to see it move to chapter 20 of 25.

It’s been getting a substantial overhaul already today, and remains one of my favourite chapters.

This is my debut novel.

What pleases …

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Good morning

I woke up at 5:00am (as usual) to find that there’s been refreshing rain in London overnight (and it’s just started again).

Hoping to complete my first full edit of #CopperWolf this weekend (it will take me into next week no doubt).

I started the novel on 2 Jan 2025, and “On the Wolf Wavelength” was earmarked as chapter 7 of 10.

It’s one of the most fundamental parts of …

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Working away at editing my 2900-word trans-Europe train article to 1400 words, and after a few hours I'm down to 1556 words. Sounds good, but its so much harder once you've got rid of the obviously unnecessary stuff. Wish me luck!

#ScribesAndMakers 7/15 How's your creativity going? Share a paragraph or image for critique?

It's going well, I think. My current focus is editing, but Rai and I recently started re-drafting one of our stories from last winter. Progress and some fun on all sides.

Here's my most recent snippet from Planting Life:

They finished raising that section – the entire house-to-be now had walls to the height of eir knees – and Kyawtchais gratefully stood and stretched eir back. Spinning was not idle work, but a full day at the walls used more and different muscles than Kyawtchais was used to.

That, too, was like creating a family.

Together, Kyawtchais went with the gruff-one and silent-one to the outside hearth. Today, ey would stay for dinner.

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Currently #amediting

One of these is old and one is new. And I won’t say which way round they are.

Gut feeling please. Which version looks better to you?

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I'm editing parts of my dissertation to add content and simplify the language in the hopes of widening my audience beyond #academia. I knew this would be hard, but it’s turned out to be grueling. Adding content is interesting and fun. But stripping out all the academic jargon without tying myself in knots explaining linguistic concepts is proving quite difficult. I've been marinating in jargon for years and now I'm having to sweat it all out like toxins.

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